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A Little Poem on grief

#1 User is offline   Chai

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Posted 28 January 2009 - 12:40 AM


So, I wrote this a while back...and it's sortof a vague little poem, about the experience of grief, and hope for some sort of newness, while still remembering our loved ones...

It's not very direct. I guess you could call it...metaphorical. Not sure if it makes sense, but anyway... rolleyes.gif


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by Chai

Pendulum pendulum
endlessly shaking, waking
waking the prisoner.

He walks, he drifts,
his eyes lift from the mist
and meet the sun that has
suddenly come into
being.

Being new, being alive
he walks into the horizon
Steps across a field
of yellow lights
No anger, no fright
from the night anymore
His heart is not sore
Nor do his hands
tremble in rage, in
sustenance lost

He is found, he is
a cacophony of melodies
that stutter and sink
and slide into a new
falling, a water falling
of jubilant cries
and sighs and
no more lies.

Speak, shout, leap
through the air like
the porpoise, the gazelle
away from grief, from hell
from the need to need
nothing at all.

Now it is fall
and the golden leaves
glitter, sparkle, lie
in warm beds on the ground
whispering, whispering of
the love and light
that they have
received.

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"NATURE is what we see,
The Hill, the Afternoon—
Squirrel, Eclipse, the Bumble-bee,
Nay—Nature is Heaven. "

- from Poem XXXIV by Emily Dickinson


"Love yourself now for the hope you have. You wouldn't be working on yourself if you didn't have hope." - from John Bradshaw's Creating Love

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Posted 31 January 2009 - 10:18 AM

Chai,

I think your poem is amazing. It speaks volumes of our struggle, the chaos, the hope for our loved ones. Thank you for sharing it.

Kath
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Posted 05 February 2009 - 01:59 AM



smile.gif Thank you very much, kath.

"NATURE is what we see,
The Hill, the Afternoon—
Squirrel, Eclipse, the Bumble-bee,
Nay—Nature is Heaven. "

- from Poem XXXIV by Emily Dickinson


"Love yourself now for the hope you have. You wouldn't be working on yourself if you didn't have hope." - from John Bradshaw's Creating Love

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